Letter to a Young Novelist

Mario Vargas Llosa
translated by
Natasha Wimmer

Dear Friend,

I've been so busy in the last few days that I haven't written back as soon as I should have, but I've been thinking about your letter ever since I received it. Not only because I share its enthusiasm, believing as you do that literature is the best thing ever invented to combat misfortune, but also because the questions you ask: "Where do stories come from?" and "How do novelists come up with their ideas?" still intrigue me as much as they did in the early days of my literary apprenticeship, even now that I've written a good many novels.

I have an answer for you, which will have to be very nuanced if it is not to be completely false. All stories are rooted in the lives of those who write them; experience is the source from which fiction flows. This doesn't mean, of course, that novels are always thinly disguised biographies of their authors; rather, that in every fiction, even the most freely imagined, it is possible to uncover a starting point, a secret node viscerally linked to the experiences of the writer. I'd venture to claim that there are no exceptions to this rule and that, as a result, scientifically pure invention does not exist in literature. All fictions are structures of fantasy and craft erected around certain acts, people, or circumstances that stand out in the writer's memory and stimulate his imagination, leading him to fabricate a world so rich and various that sometimes it is almost impossible (and sometimes just plain impossible) to recognize in it the autobiographical material that was its genesis and that is, in a way, the secret heart of all fiction, as well as its obverse and antithesis.

At a youth conference, I tried to explain this process as a backward striptease. Writing novels is the equivalent of what professional strippers do when they take off their clothes and exhibit their naked bodies on stage. The novelist performs the same acts in reverse. In constructing the novel, he goes through the motions of getting dressed, hiding the nudity in which he began under heavy, multicolored articles of clothing conjured out of his imagination. The process is so complex and exacting that many times not even the author is able to identify in the finished product—that exuberant display of his ability to invent imaginary people and worlds—the images lurking in his memory, fixed there by life, which sparked his imagination, spurred him on, and induced him to produce his story.

As for themes, well, I believe the novelist feeds off himself, like the catoblepas, the mythical animal that appears to St. Anthony in Flaubert's The Temptation of St. Anthony and that Borges later recreated in his Book of Imaginary Beings. The catoblepas is an impossible creature that devours itself, beginning with its feet. Likewise, the novelist scavenges his own experience for raw material for stories—in a more abstract sense, of course. He does this not just in order to re-create characters, anecdotes, or landscapes from the stuff of certain memories but also to gather fuel from them for the willpower that must sustain him if he is to see the long, hard project through.

I'll venture a little farther in discussing the themes of fiction. The novelist doesn't choose his themes; he is chosen by them. He writes on certain subjects because certain things have happened to him. In the choice of a theme, the writer's freedom is relative, perhaps even nonexistent. In any case, it is nothing when compared to his freedom to choose the literary form of his work; there, it seems to me, he enjoys total liberty—and total responsibility. My impression is that life—a big word, I know—inflicts themes on a writer through certain experiences that impress themselves on his consciousness or subconscious and later compel him to shake himself free by turning them into stories. We need hardly seek out examples of the way themes from life thrust themselves on writers, because all testimonies tend to concur: a story, a character, a situation, a mystery, haunted me, obsessed me, importuned me from the very depths of my self, until I was obliged to write it to be free of it. Of course, Proust's is the first name that comes to anyone's mind. A real writer-catoblepas, wasn't he? Who ever consumed themselves more thoroughly or profitably, digging like an archaeologist in all the nooks and crannies of memory, than the industrious creator of In Search of Lost Time, that monumental artistic re-creation of Proust's daily life, family, surroundings, friendships, relationships, speakable or unspeakable appetites, likes and dislikes—and, at the same time, of the subtle and mysterious charms of the human spirit in its painstaking efforts to collect, sort, unearth and bury, associate and dissociate, polish or deface the images that memory retains of time past. Proust's biographers (Painter, for example) have been able to come up with long lists of real experiences and people concealed in the sumptuous inventions of the Proustian saga, demonstrating beyond a doubt that this prodigious literary creation was assembled out of raw materials from the life of its author. But what those lists of autobiographical data unearthed by the critics really prove to us is something else: the creative capacity of Proust, who, exploiting his introspection and his immersion in the past, transformed the incidents of his fairly conventional existence into a splendid tapestry, a stunning representation of the human condition perceived from the point of view of a consciousness turned inward to view the unfolding of life itself.

Why, of all the infinite occurrences of a writer's life, do some stimulate creativity so vigorously, and so many others filter through the memory without rousing the imagination?

This brings us to another realization, no less important than the previous one. Although the starting point of a novelist's invention is what he has lived, that is not, and cannot be, its endpoint. The invention’s end is located at a considerable distance—sometimes a cosmic distance—from its origin, because as a theme is embodied in language and narrative, the autobiographical material is transformed, enriched (sometimes leached of value), integrated with other remembered or invented materials, and manipulated and structured—if the novel is a real creation—until it achieves the complete autonomy that fiction must assume to live of its own accord. (Those stories that never cast off from their authors and that serve only as biographical documents are, of course, failed fictions.) The task of the novelist is to transform the material supplied by his memory into an objective world constructed of words, the novel. Form is what allows the text to cohere, to take concrete shape; and it is in the manipulation of form, if my conception of the literary project is correct (and I repeat, I have my doubts), that the novelist enjoys complete freedom and therefore responsibility for his results. If what you are reading between the lines is that, in my opinion, fiction writers are not responsible for their themes (since life assigns them) but are responsible for the way they convert them into literature, and that as a result it is possible to say that they are ultimately responsible for their success or failure—for their mediocrity or genius—that is indeed exactly what I mean to say.

Why, of all the infinite occurrences of a writer's life, do some stimulate creativity so vigorously, and so many others filter through the memory without rousing the imagination? I don't know for sure. All I have is a suspicion. And that is that the faces, anecdotes, situations, and conflicts that impress themselves on a writer, leading him to dream up stories, are precisely those representing that dissent from real life, from the world as it is, which, as I noted in my previous letter, is the root of the novelist's vocation, the hidden impulse that drives a woman or a man to defy the real world by replacing it symbolically with fiction.

Of the many examples that might be cited to illustrate this idea, I choose that of a minor writer—though he was prolific to the point of incontinence—of eighteenth-century France, Restif de la Bretonne. I don't choose him for his talent—he didn't have much—but for the clear-cut nature of his particular rebellion against reality, his discomfort in the real world, which drove him to engineer fictional realities designed to mimic the world as he would have liked it to be.

In the many novels written by Restif de la Bretonne—the best known is his lengthy novelistic autobiography, Monsieur Nicolas—eighteenth-century France, rural and urban, is documented by a painstaking sociologist and rigorous observer of human types, customs, daily routines, work, festivals, superstitions, attire, and beliefs, in such a way that his books have become a veritable treasure trove for researchers: historians, anthropologists, ethnologists, and sociologists have helped themselves liberally to the information excavated by the tireless Restif from the quarry of his era. Nevertheless, in being transposed into his novels, this social and historical realism so copiously described undergoes a radical transformation, and that is why it is possible to speak of the novels as fiction. In the teeming world he creates, similar in so many details to the real world that inspired it, men fall in love with women not for the beauty of their faces, the slenderness of their waists, their good breeding, or spiritual charms but ultimately for the beauty of their feet or the elegance of their boots. Restif de la Bretonne was a fetishist, which in real life made him an eccentric among his contemporaries, an exception to the rule, that is to say, a "dissident" from reality. And that dissidence, surely the driving force of his vocation, is revealed to us in his works, in which life is corrected, reworked in the image and likeness of Restif himself. In the world as Restif experienced it, it was natural and normal that the principal female attribute, the object of pleasure coveted by men—all men—should be that delicate extremity and, by extension, its coverings, stockings and shoes. Few writers make it possible to grasp so plainly the process by which fiction transforms the through the subjective urges—desires, appetites, dreams, grudges, and so on—of novelists as this instructive Frenchman.

That is what authenticity or sincerity is for the novelist: the acceptance of his demons and the decision to serve them as well as possible.

All creators of fiction are embroiled in the same process, though less thoroughly and blatantly. There is something in their lives like the fetishism of Restif—a noble craving for justice, an egotistical drive to satisfy the most sordid masochistic or sadistic urges, a reasonable human longing to live a life of adventure, an undying love, and so on—that makes them wish passionately for a world different from the one they live in, a world they are then compelled to construct of words and upon which they stamp, usually in code, their questioning of real life and their affirmation of that other reality which their selfishness or generosity spurs them to set up in place of the one they've been allotted.

Perhaps, my budding young novelist friend, this is the right moment to speak of a notion dangerous when it is applied to literature: authenticity. What does it mean to be an authentic writer? What is certain is that fiction is, by definition, fraud—something that is not real, yet pretends to be—and that all novels are lies passing themselves off as truth, creations whose power of persuasion depends entirely on the novelist's skill at performing conjuring and sleight-of-hand tricks, like a circus or theater magician. So does it make sense to speak of authenticity in fiction, a genre in which it is most authentic to be a trickster, a swindler? It does, but in this way: the authentic novelist is the novelist who docilely obeys the rules life dictates, writing on those themes born out of experience and possessed of urgency and avoiding all others. That is what authenticity or sincerity is for the novelist: the acceptance of his demons and the decision to serve them as well as possible.

The novelist who doesn't write about what deep down stimulates and inspires him and who coldly chooses subjects or themes in a rational manner because he believes that way he'll have a better chance at success is inauthentic and most likely a bad novelist (even if he is successful—the best-seller lists are crowded with very bad novelists, as you are well aware). But it seems unlikely to me that anyone will become a creator—a transformer of reality—if he doesn't write encouraged and nourished from the depths of his being by those ghosts (or demons) who've made us novelists determined protesters and reconstructors of life in the stories we tell. I think that to accept that imposition—to write about what obsesses us and excites us and is viscerally though often mysteriously part of our lives—is to write "better," with more conviction and energy, and to be better equipped to undertake the exciting but also arduous and sometimes disappointing and harrowing task of composing a novel.

Those writers who shun their demons and set themselves themes because they believe their own aren't original or appealing enough are making an enormous mistake. In and of itself, no literary theme is good or bad. Any theme can be either, and the verdict depends not on the theme itself but rather on what it becomes when the application of form—narrative style and structure—makes it a novel. It is the form a theme is couched in that makes a story original or trivial, profound or superficial, complex or simple; that lends its characters depth, ambiguity, credibility, or turns them into lifeless caricatures, the creations of a puppeteer. That is another of the few rules of literature which, it seems to me, brooks no exceptions: the themes of a novel themselves promise nothing, because they'll be judged good or bad, appealing or dull, solely in view of what the novelist does to turn them into a reality of words ranged in a certain order.

Well, my friend, I think that's all for now.

Fondly,

Originally published:
July 1, 2002

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